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Joy Nicholas's avatar

but pulling at one piece

makes the other more stuck.

I lay my tangle at His feet,

say, “it’s too messed up.

——love this image so much!! All of this was so so good!!

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Rebecca Marie's avatar

Awww thank you Joy! I've had this image tucked away for well over a year, not sure what to do with it. So glad to hear you love it!!

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Jody L. Collins's avatar

Oh my.........what a creative cascade of words, Becca!

"It’s

mercy

all

the

way

down

and

I

hate

giving

up

control. "

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Rebecca Marie's avatar

Thanks Jody! 💛

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Adrienne Morris's avatar

Love the poem about worry. I've been a worrier all my life. It's been interesting having an adopted child who's suffered deep trauma and has severe anxiety. Because I have anxiety it's been a bonding trait. LOL It's something we can work on together and it makes her feel that she's not alone. It also strengthens my faith in God because I feel that he put us together for a reason.

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Rebecca Marie's avatar

This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing 💛

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Amy Grass's avatar

Love love love, my friend.

When I was pregnant with our third, I resolved to say yes to every offer to help. It was humbling. But I'm so glad I did ♥️

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Rebecca Marie's avatar

Awww thank you! So glad to hear this. I keep telling myself the same thing, "I accept all offers of help!"

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Olivia Murphy's avatar

So good. Holding onto the “it’s mercy all the way down” ❤️

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Rebecca Marie's avatar

Awww thank you Olivia! 💛

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Megan Hogg's avatar

Goodness I loved all of these!! “Decluttering while pregnant with my third baby” resonated especially

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Rebecca Marie's avatar

Thank you so much Megan!! 💛

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Michelle Windsor's avatar

I think I say that first stanza of A Prayer for Words everyday. (Might add a spicy word or two occasionally. Lol.)

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Rebecca Marie's avatar

Hahahaha that's great! Thanks Michelle! 💛

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Kym VdP's avatar

Beeeeeec these are so good once again! 🙌🏻💛 Love all of them!

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Rebecca Marie's avatar

Thanks Kym!! 💛💛

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Ashley L Case's avatar

I just love reading your poetry, Bec🥰❤️

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Rebecca Marie's avatar

Aww thank you!! 💛💛

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Annelise Roberts's avatar

When I came back to comment I had somehow attached the ending of the second poem to the first one in my mind. I love how the themes are really the same thing from different angles. I hate giving up control, too.

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Rebecca Marie's avatar

Ahhh yes, I can see that now! It's all giving up control haha thank you!!

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Sara Koert's avatar

A prayer for words 🫶🏻

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Rebecca Marie's avatar

Thanks!

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